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ricv64 Posted Wed 20 Feb, 2008 10:20 PM |
scene 6
setting , The Saddlerack saloon , a uber redneck bar in Fremont California . The Marquee reads Megg_Inc & her Country Soul Brothers (played by the real life Megg backed by Los Lobos )They're playing Teenage Fanclubs God Knows it's true , it's kinda rockin for a country venue . At a table sitting Hey Jude , Warriors jersey & a cowboy hat & boots are being worn.
She's apprroached by a strawberry blonde
Jude - " Yo Lindsey , howz it ? "
Lindsey - OK I guess , nice disguise any word on the diaries ?"
Jude- " Moray was working deep cover but we had to pull him out when Nikki was busted ".
Jude - " yeah dude they'd never think to follow us here "
Lindsey -" The Soma diaries must not fall into their hands , the spice must flow ."
Jude - " What ?"
Lindsey - " Oh Like Dune was on the other day , I've been waitting to say the spice must flow for days ".
jude(laughing ) - " Oh I needed that funny shit homeslice "
Lindsey " howed the game go ? I always get Stevie Jackson mixed up with the dude from Belle & Sebastian "
Jude pulls out a small hand recorder and presses play,Moreys voice
-" stevie jackson is the dude from Belle & Sebastian "
Jude- " Meh !"
Lindsey - "OK , Like I'll let you know when I hear from Big foot I'm going for frozen yougurt you wanna come "
Jude- " I'm jonzin for some boysenberry lets cut "
Lindsey - "WERD! "
Camera cuts to a room , outside the window is the effle tower , close up of a hand with a lit ciggarette , the phone rings , it goes black
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ashleyb Posted Wed 20 Feb, 2008 11:21 PM |
Lol!
I think I'm out of the loop- where are the first scenes? When did this screen writing start?
EDIT: Thanks Ric, all caught up now! |
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megg_inc Posted Wed 20 Feb, 2008 11:22 PM |
| It's getting better! But I must warn you- 'the real life Megg_Inc' & her Country Soul Brothers- not a good idea. Lol. |
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I Came in Through the Bathroom Window Posted Wed 20 Feb, 2008 11:53 PM |
megg_inc wrote: It's getting better! But I must warn you- 'real life Megg_Inc' & her Country Soul Brothers- not a good idea. Lol.
I'm loving it xD.
This part was great:
Quote:
Lindsey " howed the game go ? I always get Stevie Jackson mixed up with the dude from Belle & Sebastian "
Jude pulls out a small hand recorder and presses play,Moreys voice
-" stevie jackson is the dude from Belle & Sebastian"
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heyjude Posted Thu 21 Feb, 2008 12:47 AM |
| HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA!!! that was great :-D |
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lindsey22295 Posted Thu 21 Feb, 2008 12:52 AM |
| Haha Love it! Yes fro yo. Who plays me? And who is playing Jude? |
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I Came in Through the Bathroom Window Posted Thu 21 Feb, 2008 12:54 AM |
lindsey22295 wrote: Haha Love it! Yes fro yo. Who plays me? And who is playing Jude?
I think Salma Hayek is playing Jude. |
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Turtleneck Posted Thu 21 Feb, 2008 2:28 PM |
| Wow, it's getting very international. Won't you PA-LEASE just start a screenplay thread already and put them all in one place?! Eiffel, not effle. |
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ricv64 Posted Thu 21 Feb, 2008 2:51 PM |
maybe thats not the real tower .
I asked this author, Charles Bock , last night about if this screenplay this should have it's own thread and he said , " Nah " .
but all continuations will be in this thread |
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Turtleneck Posted Thu 21 Feb, 2008 4:14 PM |
Well, seeing as Charles Bock is not in our collegium, he has no authority here.
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Moray Posted Thu 21 Feb, 2008 4:18 PM |
| haha, no way, I made a script! Awesome, cheer Ric, I'm honoured! It sounds like something I would say as well! |
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Moray Posted Thu 21 Feb, 2008 4:35 PM |
megg_inc wrote: LOL!!
So who's gonna play our boys- Moray and Dubz?
If it's not me playing me, can I request the off the wall suggestion of Robert Duvall? In like a white shirt black waistcoat, black tie, comes with dirty apron, sleeves rolled up and constantly polishing a glass with a dirty rag. Classic Bartender. Like Back to the Futre Pt 3. But with Robert Duvall. |
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megg_inc Posted Thu 21 Feb, 2008 6:50 PM |
| Isn't he kinda...too old to play you? |
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goosey_84 Posted Thu 21 Feb, 2008 7:17 PM |
| lol this movie is gonna blow everyone outta the water! |
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I Came in Through the Bathroom Window Posted Thu 21 Feb, 2008 8:57 PM |
goosey_84 wrote: lol this movie is gonna blow everyone outta the water!
Hey Cel, since you're the executive producer.
I wanted to talk to you about the actor playing the naked argentinian. Ric said it should be Claudio Caniggia. Couldn't it be Gael García Bernal? I think it's a much better choice! :oP |
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