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ricv64 Posted Tue 19 Feb, 2008 6:22 PM |
Scene 5 from SOMA DIARIES
setting , A road house in Colorado . a Triumph 650 with extended forks , hardtail , no front brake WTF , candy apple red with blue flames on the tank , pulls up .
Inside the bar ,Avalanche parafranalia all over the place , odly quite clean . The game is on , REDWINGS vrs Avalanche .
Nikki is wearing a Redwings T shirt , " dougie scarf " , Levi cut off vest , big letters on the back SHE DEVILS M C skull and crossbones on back
Bartender , played by Moray Swan - " what can I get for you ?"
Nikki- " heh , you talk funny , Strohs in a bottle "
Moray - " Well you do too homeslice but We arn't aloud to sell that here "
nikki - " well if you did i'd buy everyone a round after the Wings kick some avalanche assss ! "
( listening in )
Local drunk - " The wings suck "
Nikki -" Anchor steam then , the San FRANcisco treat "
Camera cuts to the clock , dial moves Redwings have kicked Colorados ass , royally .
local drunk - " hey "
nikki ignores
other drunk (reaching towards her ) " hey we're talking to you "
Nikki - " i'm outta here ya bunch of dooooooshbags "
drunk spills drink on Dougie scarf
Nikki- " well , I'm affraid thats gonna get expensive "
perfect roundhouse knocks fool off his ass
fight ensuse , Ninjas appear from the ceiling , out numbering and over powering our heroine.
Sheriff appears
Sheriff - " Well looks like we got one, bust the tail light on the bike and we'll haul her in "
they take her away , Shifts to boat cabin on the Mederterrian , phone rings
hand picks up reciver
Dubs - " Hello "
voice on the other end ( Jude )- " Dude "
Dubz- " My god really ?"
jude- Duuude !!
DubZ -" you think ?"
Jude - " Duuuuude !!!111!!!!!!!"
Dubz- " right , I'm on It "
hangs up , redials
Dubz " send up a couple bottles of the good stuff , I need to brainstorm " Dramatic cut to black
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I Came in Through the Bathroom Window Posted Tue 19 Feb, 2008 6:34 PM |
Lol!
So that's how Nikki got arrested!
And there are ninjas too xD. This movie is going to be a massive hit.
EDIT: I loved the dialog between Jude and Dubz xD. |
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megg_inc Posted Tue 19 Feb, 2008 6:35 PM |
LOL!!
So who's gonna play our boys- Moray and Dubz? |
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Turtleneck Posted Tue 19 Feb, 2008 6:43 PM |
| Excellent. |
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weirdmom Posted Tue 19 Feb, 2008 6:46 PM |
| Your screenplay is coming together nicely Ric. |
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Turtleneck Posted Tue 19 Feb, 2008 7:15 PM |
| Ric, could you put all the scenes together in one post? That'd be nice. |
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weirdmom Posted Tue 19 Feb, 2008 7:20 PM |
| Good idea Kayte. |
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ricv64 Posted Tue 19 Feb, 2008 7:20 PM |
| The music will be Closer , as Nikki pulls up to the bar . Fight scene will be the Ramones version of Street Fightin Man |
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Nikki Posted Wed 20 Feb, 2008 3:53 AM |
Hahahaa! Sorry I missed this! It's hilarious! (Nobody messes with my Red Wings!) :P
I can't wait for the next scene!
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heyjude Posted Wed 20 Feb, 2008 5:12 AM |
HA HA HA! it's getting really good! i like nikki's kick-ass action scene. and the dialog with dubz is awesome duuuuuuuuuuude!
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ElspethOllie Posted Wed 20 Feb, 2008 5:26 AM |
| Jebus, you have way too much time on your hands. |
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Scottish Dubliner Posted Wed 20 Feb, 2008 10:03 AM |
Love It, Duuuuuuuddddddeeeee.
Dubz
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Turtleneck Posted Wed 20 Feb, 2008 1:56 PM |
megg_inc wrote: LOL!!
So who's gonna play our boys- Moray and Dubz?
I think Dubz should play himself. I'm sure he could do it. |
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ricv64 Posted Wed 20 Feb, 2008 2:10 PM |
Turtleneck wrote: megg_inc wrote: LOL!!
So who's gonna play our boys- Moray and Dubz?
I think Dubz should play himself. I'm sure he could do it.
That was my plan , weird mommy , buster , moray will play themselves so far |
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Scottish Dubliner Posted Wed 20 Feb, 2008 3:28 PM |
ricv64 wrote: Turtleneck wrote: megg_inc wrote: LOL!!
So who's gonna play our boys- Moray and Dubz?
I think Dubz should play himself. I'm sure he could do it.
That was my plan , weird mommy , buster , moray will play themselves so far
Film star & Head of Marketing for your Buritto Bar, MaZn I'm gonna be busy.
Dubz
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