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Re: FAO Motor City She Devils
Moray
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Moray Posted Fri 22 Feb, 2008 2:11 PM Quote
hahaha yes!! See my other post, re: occupation of Helen!
 
Re: FAO Motor City She Devils
Moray
Posts: 1918
Moray Posted Fri 22 Feb, 2008 2:14 PM Quote
hahaha, I'm looking forward to it!

Also, Ric, best usage of the phrase 'cluster fuck' I've ever seen. Awesome.
 
Re: FAO Motor City She Devils
megg_inc
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megg_inc Posted Fri 22 Feb, 2008 2:15 PM Quote
MoraySwan wrote:
Ric, any plans for a romantic sub plot for the barman, including a love scene, with a cheeky ass shot as I exit the bed, stage left? The story is crying out for that!


LOL! Some people...
 
Re: FAO Motor City She Devils
dee
Posts: 1608
dee Posted Fri 22 Feb, 2008 3:54 PM Quote
ricv64 wrote:
Dee said it's cool that super tart Katie Price will play her



wasn't like i was gonna argue with the artistic vision of the piece
:p
 
Re: FAO Motor City She Devils
Aletways
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Aletways Posted Fri 22 Feb, 2008 5:50 PM Quote
Hahaha, I'm loving this! Waiting for scene 8 now!
 
Re: FAO Motor City She Devils
ricv64
Posts: 10115
ricv64 Posted Fri 22 Feb, 2008 5:53 PM Quote
dee wrote:
ricv64 wrote:
Dee said it's cool that super tart Katie Price will play her



wasn't like i was gonna argue with the artistic vision of the piece
:p


see megg ? dee's gonna take a bullet in the name of artistic vision
 
Re: FAO Motor City She Devils
megg_inc
Posts: 3778
megg_inc Posted Fri 22 Feb, 2008 5:56 PM Quote
ricv64 wrote:
dee wrote:
ricv64 wrote:
Dee said it's cool that super tart Katie Price will play her



wasn't like i was gonna argue with the artistic vision of the piece
:p


see megg ? dee's gonna take a bullet in the name of artistic vision


Cool! But isn't one tart in this movie enough? You still want Tila Tequila?
 
Re: FAO Motor City She Devils
goosey_84
Posts: 5323
goosey_84 Posted Fri 22 Feb, 2008 5:56 PM Quote
Aletways wrote:
Hahaha, I'm loving this! Waiting for scene 8 now!


haha i know! this is quickly becoming my favorite novela!
 
Re: FAO Motor City She Devils
ricv64
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ricv64 Posted Fri 22 Feb, 2008 6:00 PM Quote
megg_inc wrote:
ricv64 wrote:
dee wrote:
ricv64 wrote:
Dee said it's cool that super tart Katie Price will play her



wasn't like i was gonna argue with the artistic vision of the piece
:p


see megg ? dee's gonna take a bullet in the name of artistic vision


Cool! But isn't one tart in this movie enough? You still want Tila Tequila?


I'm thinking of having the rock of love & flavor of love girls mob someone
 
Re: FAO Motor City She Devils
megg_inc
Posts: 3778
megg_inc Posted Fri 22 Feb, 2008 6:04 PM Quote
LOL, do as you wish!
 
Re: FAO Motor City She Devils
ricv64
Posts: 10115
ricv64 Posted Sat 23 Feb, 2008 5:04 AM Quote
scene 8

a montage of WaMu banks explode to the sound of goosey laughing , Nikki in a cell , Lemon Grinner being booked in to the Colorado holding center that Nikki is in. A house with broken windows .

Cuts to a Ford econoline van driving down hwy 35 , two men sit in the front seats . they're listening to the invisible band on 8 track

mozeman - "I tell you , she forgets who we work for "


Estaban - " aye , she's not signing my paycheck '

Mozeman - " good thing we're paid in cash "


Both Laugh , mumbling from a figure in the back

Estaban - " still this isn't what I signed up for "

Mozeman - " If we didn't we be turned into guano and you know it , hope this idea works "

Estaban - " she's waking up , think she's thirsty ?"

Estaban turns to the figure and pulls down the cloth covering their face

Estaban - " Sorry love orders are orders , thirsty ?"

Minnesotamary - yes , but kidnapping me isn't going to get you anything . Once I get loose I'll stab you in the face ! "

mozeman - " we're stabbed in the face regardless , we're just trying to stay ahead of the curve a little longer "

Estaban - " thanks for the scarf "

The van heads South .

Cut to the prison yard . Nikki is running laps on the excersise yard . Grinner jogs up onlong side

Grinner - " so you a Motor City She Devil ?"

Nikki - sarcasticaly - " you gotta ask ?"


Grinner - " stupid question INNIT , trying to start up a Candom chapter "

Nikki - " Really we say branch though ! "

Grinner - " makin fun ? I'll toss you in the fookin canal "

Both laugh . A guard stops them

" Hey you " pointing at Nicky " your lawyer is here "

Nikki to Grinner - " catch ya at tonights riot "

both laugh


Inside a conference room nikki sits with her lawyer , A tv is on in the other room televising the save Nikki concert in Glasgow TV repoter Lauren interviews Dougie . Nikki watches outta the corber of her eye

Lauren - " Any final statement "

Dougie -" we don't condone what Nikki has done but we believe she was railroaded in and should get a fair trial "

her lawyer comes in

Sandy - " we can win this they have nothing "

nikki no responce

sandy - " trust me , I work for the good guys , we have a court date in a week "


birdseye view of the prison , there's a few fires already . A 1960 Chevey Apache panel truck is waitting out
front

 
Re: FAO Motor City She Devils
goosey_84
Posts: 5323
goosey_84 Posted Sat 23 Feb, 2008 5:09 AM Quote
ricv64 wrote:
scene 8

a montage of WaMu banks explode to the sound of goosey laughing ,


maniacally i hope! ;P

fact: the soma diaries are RAWKIN' my world!!
 
Re: FAO Motor City She Devils
ricv64
Posts: 10115
ricv64 Posted Sat 23 Feb, 2008 5:15 AM Quote
goosey_84 wrote:
ricv64 wrote:
scene 8

a montage of WaMu banks explode to the sound of goosey laughing ,


maniacally i hope! ;P



Totaly ! Oh and Mozeman has a neckless with a monkeys paw on it
 
Re: FAO Motor City She Devils
I Came in Through the Bathroom Window
Posts: 7556
I Came in Through the Bathroom Window Posted Sat 23 Feb, 2008 5:16 AM Quote
The fookin canal and the "Save Nikki concert in Glasgow" parts are priceless!
And Minnesotamary saying "I'll stab you in the face" is great too xDD.
 
Re: FAO Motor City She Devils
lindsey22295
Posts: 1790
lindsey22295 Posted Sat 23 Feb, 2008 6:36 AM Quote
Loving the new installment. Keep it up! :D
 
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