Hello to everyone!
I was wondering if any of you could (please, please, please!) take the time to read this and tell me if there's something wrong with it (probably it will be a lot of things wrong xD). Feel free to correct everything you want :o).
Thanks in advance! :o)
This is the text:
The strange man, who was looking at them and now was approaching them, had a secret that ashamed him. Paul, who had seen him caving and burying something, thought it was a very dirty secret that’s why he decided to find out what the man was hiding in the ground. Samantha, the girl who helped Paul to cave the hole, had seen the man too and Paul knew it, that’s the reason why he wanted her to help him. Even though she didn’t want to do it and was terrified, in the end she did it.
The man was getting closer and closer to Samantha, who wasn’t able think clearly, her head was spinning around and the only thing she wanted to do was running away from there. But then she thought of Paul, who had fallen into the hole they had caved, so, she couldn’t move from where she was standing on.
Finally the scary man got to where Samantha was standing, she couldn’t scream because she couldn’t even breathe. The man, who hold her by the arms and looked at her in the eye, started to talk... He said that they shouldn’t have ever caved in that place, where a huge tree was aside, and now they’ll have to pay this by hearing his tragic story.
During his childhood he had collected a few things important to him and kept them in a box that he called the ‘Memoir Box’, but unfortunately he had lost it when he ran away from home. The man, who now looked nice and kind although with a lot of suffering in his eyes, said that his parents had neglected him and that he was always alone. He had two things that made his life so much better: his ‘Memoir Box’ and the tree next to the hole Paul and Samantha had caved. The box obviously because it contained all the important things to him and the tree because his parents, who never were with him, used to say that if he ever felt alone he just had to hug a tree, so, he chose that tree and whenever he felt lonely or sad he used to go immediately to that huge tree.
Years later, after running away from home, he returned to the house where he used to live at when he was a kid to look for his ‘Memoir Box’ that was possibly there. Eventually he found it and decided to bury next to the tree he used to hug so tightly when he was feeling alone, this way he would be burying his extremely sorrowful past.
When he ended his story, Samantha, who first was terrified of him now was crying and hugging him. The sad man, whose name was Tommy, helped Samantha to take out of the hole Paul. Due to they all felt very sad went directly to the tree and hugged it.
