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lilly Posted Mon 30 Jun, 2008 5:51 PM |
Hey there (you campeones!)
So, not only did we looooooooose yesterday (well, of course we lost, Spain was faaaaaar too good for us!)- but IN ADDITION to that, I have to write the most useless thing ever for my Spanish class at uni.
Our lecturer gave us chunks of an imaginative newspaper article. And "all we have to do" is turn them into a proper text.
At least that's what she said.
Now I tried this, and (of course!) the text chunks are incomplete, sometimes grammatically wrong and we have to use specific "conectores del discurso" to join the chunks.
Now, I tried doing it anyway and I know I have made like 1000 grammatical mistakes while trying to get the order right and put in those stupid "conectores del discurso" they wanted us to use.
Erm. Now.
Does anyone have the time to read the stupid thing and tell me what's horribly wrong?
It's not very long, half a page.
Please? :)
Think "aaaw, poor German girl has to deal with her country's team playing horribly" and have pity with me ;) |
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travisturkey Posted Mon 30 Jun, 2008 5:53 PM |
lilly wrote: Hey there (you campeones!)
So, not only did we looooooooose yesterday (well, of course we lost, Spain was faaaaaar too good for us!)- but IN ADDITION to that, I have to write the most useless thing ever for my Spanish class at uni.
Our lecturer gave us chunks of an imaginative newspaper article. And "all we have to do" is turn them into a proper text.
At least that's what she said.
Now I tried this, and (of course!) the text chunks are incomplete, sometimes grammatically wrong and we have to use specific "conectores del discurso" to join the chunks.
Now, I tried doing it anyway and I know I have made like 1000 grammatical mistakes while trying to get the order right and put in those stupid "conectores del discurso" they wanted us to use.
Erm. Now.
Does anyone have the time to read the stupid thing and tell me what's horribly wrong?
It's not very long, half a page.
Please? :)
Think "aaaw, poor German girl has to deal with her country's team playing horribly" and have pity with me ;)
poor Turkish guy may be in need of a German girl for his German homework as well :s |
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lilly Posted Mon 30 Jun, 2008 5:56 PM |
travisturkey wrote:
poor Turkish guy may be in need of a German girl for his German homework as well :s
no problem!
I'll send you a message with my email-address :) |
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Monica Posted Mon 30 Jun, 2008 6:03 PM |
lilly wrote: Does anyone have the time to read the stupid thing and tell me what's horribly wrong?
I do!!!!! I feel so happy that I can do whatever you want me to, hahahaha. |
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lilly Posted Mon 30 Jun, 2008 6:09 PM |
Monica wrote: lilly wrote: Does anyone have the time to read the stupid thing and tell me what's horribly wrong?
I do!!!!! I feel so happy that I can do whatever you want me to, hahahaha.
Mónica! Have I told you that I looooove Spanish people? ;D |
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Aletways Posted Mon 30 Jun, 2008 6:20 PM |
| I can read it if you want =o) . |
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I Came in Through the Bathroom Window Posted Mon 30 Jun, 2008 9:26 PM |
| I'm always late for your threads Lilly, but once again, I offer myself to read it :o) |
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lilly Posted Tue 01 Jul, 2008 9:25 AM |
| oooh that's so nice, thanks a gazillion!! :D |
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bara Posted Tue 01 Jul, 2008 2:19 PM |
lilly woher kommst du?
im not able in that language spanish, sorry i cant help ;) |
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Peewee Posted Tue 01 Jul, 2008 2:59 PM |
| You should just have a constant homework thread here!!! lol BTW what kind of grades do you get when others do your homework? lmao |
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Aletways Posted Tue 01 Jul, 2008 3:36 PM |
| In this case we just corrected her homework. But there really wasn't much to correct. |
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lilly Posted Tue 01 Jul, 2008 4:31 PM |
| Ich komm aus München ;) |
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lilly Posted Tue 01 Jul, 2008 4:34 PM |
Peewee wrote: You should just have a constant homework thread here!!! lol BTW what kind of grades do you get when others do your homework? lmao
I don't get ANY grades for the stuff! I'm not one of those girls ;p
It's just that we don't have much time at uni to get things corrected, and it takes our lecturer a long time to hand essays back - but the exam (I won't get a grade for it, I just have to pass) is in 3 weeks time and I need to know where my mistakes are...
But I won't bother you guys anymore from now on, this was probably the last essay this semester and I'm just doing conversation courses next term ;)
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I Came in Through the Bathroom Window Posted Tue 01 Jul, 2008 5:17 PM |
| Oh but it doesn't bother us at all eh? |
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