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mcveighp Posted Thu 08 Jan, 2009 5:25 AM |
ok i'm honestly gonna write some stuff here of the top of my head!
Its a lyric writting exercise! lets see how well people can do!
And no cheating! just write for 8 lines
A final farwells greated
with a silence thats unknown
as you drift off in the eather
at rest now like a stone
as i close my eyes i thank you
for the life you've given me
and i pray that you're at peace now
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i couldn't get a last line in enough time so i thought i better not cheat!
bring on the words People!!?
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BenFilbert Posted Thu 08 Jan, 2009 6:05 AM |
This wretched spew of life,
This heart ache of my soul,
This pointless shred of happiness,
Leaves a gaping hole.
This ruined chance of hope,
This horrid bitter tale,
This task that I've been given,
It's me and so I fail.
That's right. It makes absolutely no sense at all. And it's rather depressing. :)
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Intergalactic91 Posted Thu 08 Jan, 2009 2:58 PM |
You taught us then, when innocence meant,
meant something more than this,
The fateful kiss, the crushing miss,
Tears my broken heart
We'll share tears and heartache,
talking of the past,
But when I relly think about it,
I know it will never last
So here we are, your heart renewed
I felt the feeling grow
But whether you'll see me here again
Is something we'll never know
This did take me a bit longer than it probably should and it doesn't really go anywhere..it's a bit depessing |
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