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bogusblue Posted Thu 24 Apr, 2008 4:55 AM |
I haven't be able to read scenes 3 and 4, but now that have I just can say this screenplay is freakin' awesome!! Love it. I love how bad-ass are Juli, Megg and Jude hahaha. And I really like the "dream on bobo" lol. And Jude's and Megg's entrance is brilliant, uber cool maZn! :oP. |
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ricv64 Posted Thu 24 Apr, 2008 2:48 PM |
actually megg says,
" droZp eZm bitcheZs " |
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ricv64 Posted Fri 02 May, 2008 1:51 AM |
PSYCH
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CgLy3ArIVRE
how come formwer enimies megg and jude are teaming up ? |
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goosey_84 Posted Fri 02 May, 2008 2:36 AM |
hijole! yeah megg's entrance is badass...all kinds of good stuff is goin' down! |
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ricv64 Posted Fri 02 May, 2008 1:46 PM |
Scene 5
setting , several years earlier , a peaceful town several miles EAST of Suison city , DAVIS . It is a HOT day but peaceful . An Earthquake hits , water towers fall down , multi camera shots ,Levy's break . the town is flooded , camera focus on a strawberry blonde teenager swimming to safety . Camera closes in on the face , it's Lindsey . filter on the lens makes it appear to be on a large screen , camera pulls back to a large auditorium . It's the science Institute , goosey , Jude and Alma worked at ( still years ago ).Camera focuses on the back row , Jude , Goosey are sitting watching the presentation.
Jude - " Golly that's rough on that poor girl , why did they take out that town ? "
Goosey - " I think they flipped a coin , science you know hell don't sweat it . It's only some po dunk town in the North "
Jude- " still I wonder what are we really doing here "
Goosey - " Jude you're not getting deep are you ? ( laughing ) You sure you're cut out for this line of work , you meet that newbie from Poland yet ? "
Jude - " i feel conflicted , lets go for margaritas later and watch the redwings or something , i need to get a heat on "
Goosey - "WERD maZn ! Oh look Abs is gonna speak "
From the podium Absolute Purple gets up and prepares to speak , shuffling notes .
Abs ( tapping the microphone )- " testing , testing , are we ready to rawk ?"
the audience laughs
Abs - " As you see even at quarter strength , the Dunlop machine can cause great damage but it is still very unpredictable . For those worried about the surveillance footage we've given the young lady seen in the clip a full scholarship to the UC system .Please take note of the up coming chart ..... "
camera cuts back to Jude and goosey
Goosey - " You get your dress for the wedding yet ?"
Jude- " looks like I wasn't invited "
Goosey ( worried ) - " Thats odd "
jude - " It's O K I'm not hurt besides my boyfriend is on tour right now so he can't be my date ."
Goosey - " whats his band called ?
Jude - " The Frames "
Goosey - " what a strange name "
jude - " they're great don't be a square Goosey "
Goosey - " jude , i'm wilder then you'll ever be I'm sure gonna solo a pitcher of margaritas tonight , yeah Friday ! '
Jude - " Hear from mr movie star ? "
Goosey - " Hush , I wanna hear more about this crazy experiment "
Cuts to the present , Ingrids office at the 12 Galaxies , the phone rings
Ingrid ( answering on speaker )- " Hello ?"
garbeled voice midwestern in speak - " Hello I'm looking for Alejandro ?"
Ingrid - " He's around the corner at the make out room crooning to all his girlfriends "
Voice - " when's he gonna be back ?"
Ingrid - " I don't know he's with his sister and they're probaly catching up , anything else ?"
voice - " sister ?"
Ingrid - " yes almost like twins but no evil complications "
voice - " when we he be back ? "
Ingrid - " again I don't know , who is this , enough questions leave a fucking message and have a coke and a smile and shut the fuck up , you bore me ! "
voice ( laughing ) - " nevermind , maybe you should catch his act "
Ingrid - " Jeeze louise leave a message on his line , the bar line "
She hangs up . Camera pulls back to juli rolling on the couch laughing
Juli- ' now that was weerird "
cuts to a field outside of Glasgow , it's early AM there , there are lights in the sky
Jesusaremus- " they're here " |
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Turtleneck Posted Fri 02 May, 2008 2:00 PM |
The Dunlop machine, ha ha! Thanks for that nice early morning read. |
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ricv64 Posted Fri 02 May, 2008 2:16 PM |
Turtleneck wrote: The Dunlop machine, ha ha! Thanks for that nice early morning read.
early versions of the dunlop machine
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Chiito-chan Posted Fri 02 May, 2008 2:47 PM |
ricv64 wrote: Turtleneck wrote: The Dunlop machine, ha ha! Thanks for that nice early morning read.
early versions of the dunlop machine
nice guitars =) |
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heyjude Posted Fri 02 May, 2008 7:18 PM |
YAY! me and my dreamy boyfriend (guy in my avatar) in the script! Ah, I love dreamy boyfriend...
Seems I've moved on from basketball to hockey, eh? But, how come I always have problems at weddings? Like, last time, I think I lost the maid-of-honor spot to Goosey. Now I'm not invited? LOL!! :-)
Will Lindsey be doing any underwater stunts/action scenes? That would be cool.
GO UC system!!! |
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Aletways Posted Fri 02 May, 2008 8:16 PM |
I wonder who was the happy couple! |
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ricv64 Posted Fri 02 May, 2008 8:29 PM |
Aletways wrote: I wonder who was the happy couple!
pretty sure it was the abs wedding you , juli , goosey and Dobz attended . jude later killed the husband and screwed with the will.
Man ! lindsey has alotta violence happen to her |
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Aletways Posted Fri 02 May, 2008 8:42 PM |
ricv64 wrote: Aletways wrote: I wonder who was the happy couple!
pretty sure it was the abs wedding you , juli , goosey and Dobz attended . jude later killed the husband and screwed with the will.
Man ! lindsey has alotta violence happen to her
Hehehe, Jude is a complete bad-ass! Who was the husband? Why didn't she kill Abs? It's like the evil witch in Sleeping Beauty! I said this before, on the SOMA Diaries, about Goosey, but I can't remember why... |
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ricv64 Posted Fri 02 May, 2008 8:44 PM |
I'm so scared of Jude it ain't funny |
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heyjude Posted Fri 02 May, 2008 9:20 PM |
LOL!! I'm bad-asssssss. :-D |
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goosey_84 Posted Sat 03 May, 2008 7:18 AM |
yassss! i love bein' a wild goose! woo hoo! ;D |
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