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Re: Goosey84 presents JULI visits FRISCO
bogusblue
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bogusblue Posted Thu 24 Apr, 2008 4:55 AM Quote
I haven't be able to read scenes 3 and 4, but now that have I just can say this screenplay is freakin' awesome!! Love it. I love how bad-ass are Juli, Megg and Jude hahaha. And I really like the "dream on bobo" lol. And Jude's and Megg's entrance is brilliant, uber cool maZn! :oP.
 
Re: Goosey84 presents JULI visits FRISCO
ricv64
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ricv64 Posted Thu 24 Apr, 2008 2:48 PM Quote
actually megg says,

" droZp eZm bitcheZs "
 
Re: Goosey84 presents JULI visits FRISCO
ricv64
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ricv64 Posted Fri 02 May, 2008 1:51 AM Quote
PSYCH


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CgLy3ArIVRE

how come formwer enimies megg and jude are teaming up ?
 
Re: Goosey84 presents JULI visits FRISCO
goosey_84
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goosey_84 Posted Fri 02 May, 2008 2:36 AM Quote
hijole! yeah megg's entrance is badass...all kinds of good stuff is goin' down!
 
Re: Goosey84 presents JULI visits FRISCO
ricv64
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ricv64 Posted Fri 02 May, 2008 1:46 PM Quote
Scene 5



setting , several years earlier , a peaceful town several miles EAST of Suison city , DAVIS . It is a HOT day but peaceful . An Earthquake hits , water towers fall down , multi camera shots ,Levy's break . the town is flooded , camera focus on a strawberry blonde teenager swimming to safety . Camera closes in on the face , it's Lindsey . filter on the lens makes it appear to be on a large screen , camera pulls back to a large auditorium . It's the science Institute , goosey , Jude and Alma worked at ( still years ago ).Camera focuses on the back row , Jude , Goosey are sitting watching the presentation.



Jude - " Golly that's rough on that poor girl , why did they take out that town ? "


Goosey - " I think they flipped a coin , science you know hell don't sweat it . It's only some po dunk town in the North "

Jude- " still I wonder what are we really doing here "


Goosey - " Jude you're not getting deep are you ? ( laughing ) You sure you're cut out for this line of work , you meet that newbie from Poland yet ? "


Jude - " i feel conflicted , lets go for margaritas later and watch the redwings or something , i need to get a heat on "

Goosey - "WERD maZn ! Oh look Abs is gonna speak "



From the podium Absolute Purple gets up and prepares to speak , shuffling notes .


Abs ( tapping the microphone )- " testing , testing , are we ready to rawk ?"

the audience laughs

Abs - " As you see even at quarter strength , the Dunlop machine can cause great damage but it is still very unpredictable . For those worried about the surveillance footage we've given the young lady seen in the clip a full scholarship to the UC system .Please take note of the up coming chart ..... "

camera cuts back to Jude and goosey


Goosey - " You get your dress for the wedding yet ?"

Jude- " looks like I wasn't invited "

Goosey ( worried ) - " Thats odd "

jude - " It's O K I'm not hurt besides my boyfriend is on tour right now so he can't be my date ."

Goosey - " whats his band called ?


Jude - " The Frames "

Goosey - " what a strange name "

jude - " they're great don't be a square Goosey "

Goosey - " jude , i'm wilder then you'll ever be I'm sure gonna solo a pitcher of margaritas tonight , yeah Friday ! '


Jude - " Hear from mr movie star ? "

Goosey - " Hush , I wanna hear more about this crazy experiment "

Cuts to the present , Ingrids office at the 12 Galaxies , the phone rings


Ingrid ( answering on speaker )- " Hello ?"


garbeled voice midwestern in speak - " Hello I'm looking for Alejandro ?"

Ingrid - " He's around the corner at the make out room crooning to all his girlfriends "


Voice - " when's he gonna be back ?"

Ingrid - " I don't know he's with his sister and they're probaly catching up , anything else ?"


voice - " sister ?"

Ingrid - " yes almost like twins but no evil complications "


voice - " when we he be back ? "

Ingrid - " again I don't know , who is this , enough questions leave a fucking message and have a coke and a smile and shut the fuck up , you bore me ! "


voice ( laughing ) - " nevermind , maybe you should catch his act "

Ingrid - " Jeeze louise leave a message on his line , the bar line "

She hangs up . Camera pulls back to juli rolling on the couch laughing


Juli- ' now that was weerird "


cuts to a field outside of Glasgow , it's early AM there , there are lights in the sky



Jesusaremus- " they're here "
 
Re: Goosey84 presents JULI visits FRISCO
Turtleneck
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Turtleneck Posted Fri 02 May, 2008 2:00 PM Quote
The Dunlop machine, ha ha! Thanks for that nice early morning read.
 
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ricv64
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ricv64 Posted Fri 02 May, 2008 2:16 PM Quote
Turtleneck wrote:
The Dunlop machine, ha ha! Thanks for that nice early morning read.



early versions of the dunlop machine

http://www.planetoftheamps.com/green-orange-platoon.jpg
 
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Chiito-chan
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Chiito-chan Posted Fri 02 May, 2008 2:47 PM Quote
ricv64 wrote:
Turtleneck wrote:
The Dunlop machine, ha ha! Thanks for that nice early morning read.



early versions of the dunlop machine

http://www.planetoftheamps.com/green-orange-platoon.jpg


nice guitars =)
 
Re: Goosey84 presents JULI visits FRISCO
heyjude
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heyjude Posted Fri 02 May, 2008 7:18 PM Quote
YAY! me and my dreamy boyfriend (guy in my avatar) in the script! Ah, I love dreamy boyfriend...

Seems I've moved on from basketball to hockey, eh? But, how come I always have problems at weddings? Like, last time, I think I lost the maid-of-honor spot to Goosey. Now I'm not invited? LOL!! :-)

Will Lindsey be doing any underwater stunts/action scenes? That would be cool.

GO UC system!!!
 
Re: Goosey84 presents JULI visits FRISCO
Aletways
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Aletways Posted Fri 02 May, 2008 8:16 PM Quote
I wonder who was the happy couple!
 
Re: Goosey84 presents JULI visits FRISCO
ricv64
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ricv64 Posted Fri 02 May, 2008 8:29 PM Quote
Aletways wrote:
I wonder who was the happy couple!



pretty sure it was the abs wedding you , juli , goosey and Dobz attended . jude later killed the husband and screwed with the will.


Man ! lindsey has alotta violence happen to her
 
Re: Goosey84 presents JULI visits FRISCO
Aletways
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Aletways Posted Fri 02 May, 2008 8:42 PM Quote
ricv64 wrote:
Aletways wrote:
I wonder who was the happy couple!



pretty sure it was the abs wedding you , juli , goosey and Dobz attended . jude later killed the husband and screwed with the will.


Man ! lindsey has alotta violence happen to her


Hehehe, Jude is a complete bad-ass! Who was the husband? Why didn't she kill Abs? It's like the evil witch in Sleeping Beauty! I said this before, on the SOMA Diaries, about Goosey, but I can't remember why...
 
Re: Goosey84 presents JULI visits FRISCO
ricv64
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ricv64 Posted Fri 02 May, 2008 8:44 PM Quote
I'm so scared of Jude it ain't funny
 
Re: Goosey84 presents JULI visits FRISCO
heyjude
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heyjude Posted Fri 02 May, 2008 9:20 PM Quote
LOL!! I'm bad-asssssss. :-D
 
Re: Goosey84 presents JULI visits FRISCO
goosey_84
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goosey_84 Posted Sat 03 May, 2008 7:18 AM Quote
yassss! i love bein' a wild goose! woo hoo! ;D
 
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