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minsidesoutside_lds Posted Mon 28 Jan, 2008 2:27 AM |
Turtleneck wrote: minsidesoutside_lds wrote: What about starting with "Friends"? haha
"more about Friends", isn'it??
Oh for pity's sake, NO! ;o)
Sorry Turtleneck :) I apreciate you but I felt I should had to give it a try, hehe... You can punch me now :D
(my english's not good enough. I can't even figure out what I'm really expressing right now... (traductor is always so little accurate...) So if i said something wrong, it is not what was trying to say :D)
Here it goes...
"Friends" ( :P )
Catching a smile,
Behind the shine of saddest eyes.
Who wants?
Who dares to do what friends,
Should always do?
Not crying louder than you
As a real way of empathy.
Who cares?
Who dares to do what friends,
Should always do?
A pail of water on your face
To wake you up from a dream on time
Who could?
Who dares to do what friends,
Should always do?
The heaviest slap to feel pain,
To make you strong on your own feet.
Who’d come back?
Who’d ask for the other side of the face?
To do what friends….
....... end..
Who wants? who dares to add something? hahaha |
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Nikki Posted Mon 28 Jan, 2008 2:56 AM |
minsidesoutside_lds wrote: Turtleneck wrote: minsidesoutside_lds wrote: What about starting with "Friends"? haha
"more about Friends", isn'it??
Oh for pity's sake, NO! ;o)
Sorry Turtleneck :) I apreciate you but I felt I should had to give it a try, hehe... You can punch me now :D
(my english's not good enough. I can't even figure out what I'm really expressing right now... (traductor is always so little accurate...) So if i said something wrong, it is not what was trying to say :D)
Here it goes...
"Friends" ( :P )
Catching a smile,
Behind the shine of saddest eyes.
Who wants?
Who dares to do what friends,
Should always do?
Not crying louder than you
As a real way of empathy.
Who cares?
Who dares to do what friends,
Should always do?
A pail of water on your face
To wake you up from a dream on time
Who could?
Who dares to do what friends,
Should always do?
The heaviest slap to feel pain,
To make you strong on your own feet.
Who’d come back?
Who’d ask for the other side of the face?
To do what friends….
....... end..
Who wants? who dares to add something? hahaha
Aww...nice job! It's cute! :) Especially since English isn't your first language!
So, no takers for a song titled "Ghetto Chia Pets"??
Darn. |
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Turtleneck Posted Mon 28 Jan, 2008 2:21 PM |
Nikki wrote: First one I got was "Opportunistic Hippies" ... where's Ric? :P
LOL! I also got...
"Erupting Rendezvous In My Pants"
"Super-Sized Groove"
and "Ghetto Chia Pets"
The only titles I kinda liked were "Dreary Princess" and "Nostalgic Silence" ... sounds Travisy.
Some of those sound like instant hits! I came up with "Swirling Flatulence" and "Tantric Gerbils." (What is it with this generator and gerbils?) I also got "Colorful Miracles" which sounds quite nice. |
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Dun-dun-dunlop Posted Mon 28 Jan, 2008 6:41 PM |
Oh, WOW. The first one I got was "Dedicated Gyrations"
That is far too amusing. Not to mention appropriate. Though I do wonder who Dougie would dedicate his bass-playing to, haha... |
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Turtleneck Posted Mon 28 Jan, 2008 9:18 PM |
"Rotten People of the Past"
"Natural People Gone For Good"
"Left-Wing In-Laws"
"Saucy Gerbils" (Again with the Gerbils?)
"Ascending Ghosts"
"Tattooed Skeletons"
"Angry Gangsta"
"Depression in a Bottle"
Ugh, we need help.
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the boy with a cryptic name Posted Mon 28 Jan, 2008 9:28 PM |
There's enough song titles here to sink a ship, so get writing!
Oh and "Thorough Strudel In A Bottle" is too good not to post :D
PS. Ditto "Arrogantly Bleeding"
PPS. "Solitary Conversations" actually sounds quite good :) |
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Turtleneck Posted Mon 28 Jan, 2008 9:34 PM |
| Yes, but some of these titles spark songs that should NEVER be written! I was hoping we could all be writing using the same title or perhaps a choice of two. I do like "Solitary Conversations." |
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Turtleneck Posted Mon 28 Jan, 2008 11:46 PM |
Or we could take our inspiration from some of the thread titles.
"Come To Chile Again"
"Good Monday Mornings"
"Missing You"
"Where Are The Umbrellas"
What do you guys think? I like!! |
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Nikki Posted Tue 29 Jan, 2008 1:35 AM |
Dun-dun-dunlop wrote: Oh, WOW. The first one I got was "Dedicated Gyrations"
That is far too amusing. Not to mention appropriate. Though I do wonder who Dougie would dedicate his bass-playing to, haha...
That's great! :D Will someone please write a song about Dougie's gyrations!? |
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heysupernova Posted Tue 29 Jan, 2008 2:19 AM |
Turtleneck wrote: Or we could take our inspiration from some of the thread titles.
"Come To Chile Again"
"Good Monday Mornings"
"Missing You"
"Where Are The Umbrellas"
What do you guys think? I like!!
i like "where are the umbrellas!" guess i can write something funny about that :P i'll go work on that right awayyy |
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heysupernova Posted Tue 29 Jan, 2008 4:12 AM |
ok, let's see...
"where are the umbrellas?"
where are the umbrellas
i miss them oh so much
each rain with my fellas
always after lunch
blue and white stripes
plus a bit of rock
is all i need to stand
beside you all day long
cause heeeeeeey where are the umbrellas?
i feel empty without them, fellas
don't wanna feel the sun
and heeeeeey i'd really love a little rain
can see it soaking our little brains
i wanna feel you love
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as you can see, i'm terrible when it comes to writing songs in english :P but i wrote this version of 'u16 girls' when travis came, check it out:
U40 boys
Nananana nananananan nanana…
We met a boy in Chile, his name was Dougie Payne
He didn’t care ‘bout anything but to play the bass
We loved him in a second with that dirty dance
Sayin’ “Dougie, you rock man
You should be a dancer
Please, do it while you can”
So we’re sure that he’s young enough
To rock our worlds today
He may act like the greatest god
With that nose he sure can
And so let him come
And let us drop his paaaaaaants
Nanana nanananana nanana….
We met a boy at the airport, and then at some hotel
We called him; he picked up the phone, not sure if he was awake
He signed us all of our cds, we took a picture with him
But what we really wanted
Was to see him dancing
And writing right our names.
So we’re sure that he’s young enough
To rock our worlds today
He may act like the greatest god
With that nose he sure can
And so let him come
And let us drop his paaaaaaants
Nanananana nanana nananananana….
=D
EDT: actually, the song is all about Dougie xD |
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Yulia Nox Posted Tue 29 Jan, 2008 4:26 AM |
heysupernova wrote:
With that nose he sure can
And so let him come
u40!! xD!
edit: eso me mató xD |
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I Came in Through the Bathroom Window Posted Tue 29 Jan, 2008 4:42 AM |
U40!!! LOL!!!
It's very very funny Karla!!! xDDD |
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Nikki Posted Tue 29 Jan, 2008 4:58 AM |
You girls are NUTS! LMAO!
"We called him; he picked up the phone, not sure if he was awake" <~~~ Did this really happen? If so, please explain! |
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minsidesoutside_lds Posted Tue 29 Jan, 2008 2:45 PM |
heysupernova wrote: ok, let's see...
"where are the umbrellas?"
where are the umbrellas
i miss them oh so much
each rain with my fellas
always after lunch
blue and white stripes
plus a bit of rock
is all i need to stand
beside you all day long
cause heeeeeeey where are the umbrellas?
i feel empty without them, fellas
don't wanna feel the sun
and heeeeeey i'd really love a little rain
can see it soaking our little brains
i wanna feel you love
--------
as you can see, i'm terrible when it comes to writing songs in english :P but i wrote this version of 'u16 girls' when travis came, check it out:
U40 boys
Nananana nananananan nanana…
We met a boy in Chile, his name was Dougie Payne
He didn’t care ‘bout anything but to play the bass
We loved him in a second with that dirty dance
Sayin’ “Dougie, you rock man
You should be a dancer
Please, do it while you can”
So we’re sure that he’s young enough
To rock our worlds today
He may act like the greatest god
With that nose he sure can
And so let him come
And let us drop his paaaaaaants
Nanana nanananana nanana….
We met a boy at the airport, and then at some hotel
We called him; he picked up the phone, not sure if he was awake
He signed us all of our cds, we took a picture with him
But what we really wanted
Was to see him dancing
And writing right our names.
So we’re sure that he’s young enough
To rock our worlds today
He may act like the greatest god
With that nose he sure can
And so let him come
And let us drop his paaaaaaants
Nanananana nanana nananananana….
=D
EDT: actually, the song is all about Dougie xD
LOOÖVE IT!!! |
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